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Previously in 'The Wounded Soldiers'....

"Wait. I don't want to be alone...Please stay here..."

"Sure, love."

"Thanks..."

You closed your eyes and drifted off to sleep. "Goodnight (Name)."

__________________________

You fell into a fitful sleep.


You were surrounded by the men you had failed to save. All of the Class Four Triages were there along with other soldiers in Class Two you failed to save. Alfons walked up to you and grabbed your arm. He was covered in blood. "Du hast mich angelogen! Sie sagte, ich würde in Ordnung sein! Du hast mir nicht gesagt, dass ich konnte nicht gespeichert werden! (You lied to me! You said i'd be fine! You didn't tell me that I couldn't be saved!)"

Others walked up to me. "Sie lassen uns sterben! Sie haben uns nicht retten! (You let us die! You didn't save us!)"

They began to close in on you. "Sie haben uns nicht retten! Sie haben uns nicht retten! You didn't save us! You didn't save us!)"

You torn away from Alfons and ran as fast as you could away from the soldiers. "(Name)!"

You turned at the sound of your name. It was Alfred. He was crying. "You didn't save him! You didn't save Arthur!"

Alfred gestured to the body of Arthur which was covered in blood and was laid out on the ground. "No! I could have SWORN he was fine! He's not dead! You're just kidding around with me!"

Terrified at the sight of Arthur's dead, blood-covered body, you ran away. "(Name)!" called another voice.

'Arthur,' you thought. 'He's alive! I did save him!' You ran towards the sound of Arthur's voice. "Arthur!" you called.

"(Name)!" called Arthur. Sobs choked his voice.

You saw that Arthur was kneeling. His back was to you and he was holding Alfred's body. "He's dead, (Name)! He's dead! Why couldn't you have saved him? Why?" he said as he turned his head to look at you.

Tears were rolling down both of your faces."NO! HE CAN'T BE DEAD!"

You ran away from Arthur and Alfred. Soon, Alfred, Arthur, Alfons, and the other soldiers you couldn't save were gathering around you, stopping you from going anywhere. They all asked one question. "Why?"

"Warum?
(Why?)"

The men collected around you. "WHY?"

You woke up screaming.
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Here's Chapter 4~! I'm sorry it's so short!

I fixed the ending of Chapter 3 to my liking.

ALSO: I may or may not have an update tomorrow. I'm going to the 8th grade Formal so I may not have time to write/post Chapter 5.

P.S: This dream is based off of one I had a few months ago...*Shudders*

*Edit* Working on Chapter Five but I kinda have writer's block...I need more dreams for ideas...I'm going to sleep...

Also if anyone wants to see the pics from my Formal go to my gallery. They are posted there.

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Chapter 1: [link]
Chapter 2: [link]
Chapter 3: [link]
Chapter 4: HERE!
Chapter 5: [link]

Story (c) :iconmaisodenoshirayuki:
You (c) You (for now)
Arthur Kirkland and Alfred F. Jones (c) :iconyay-aph-plzes:
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~Lilatheawesome Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Will there be more? :3
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~MaiSodenoShirayuki Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
...I forgot to post the link to chapter five...Oops

[link]
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:icondanvseverything:
This series is AWESOME :iconyayprussiaplz:
I love it and can't wait for chapter five!
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~MaiSodenoShirayuki Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Working on it~! I inda still have writers block so i'm going to go back to sleep....
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Mood: Love ~ProfessorNami Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
so, uh... more.. right? xD
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:iconmaisodenoshirayuki:
~MaiSodenoShirayuki Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yep~! ...Though I kinda have writers block now...I'm working on it~!
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~Dreamer-of-Magic Jun 7, 2012   General Artist
scary nightmare...O.o
omg you actually had this??? :noes: that's terrible!!
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~MaiSodenoShirayuki Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah....*Shudders* I get most of my original fanfiction ideas from really odd/creepy/scary/crazy/etc. dreams...:iconsweatdropplz:
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~Dreamer-of-Magic Jun 8, 2012   General Artist
no worries. actually i have wacky dreams all the time..O.o
especially the past few days...:O
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~MaiSodenoShirayuki Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
O.O I had one where it was a fairy tale book but the princess was good but when you flipped to the next page of the book, she came out and tried to kill me.....
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